A nicely formatted and unified by presentation. I like the gray gradient background. It is still dark enough on the top to provide contrast to the text. I like the size of text on slide one but hike up "Christopher Bucklow" and place "Famous English Artist" under it, and increase the size of his picture for better balance. Keep text to one line on slide two and increase the map size. Slide three should be a bullet list with minimal words and the list should be supported with visuals on slides four through six. Slides four and five are exactly what I'm looking for: beautiful balance. Slide five's image needs to be increased and raised. Their should be more negative space on the bottom than the top. I like the picture of Bucklow with his art work on the last slide. Make that image bigger and add one line of text above it for better balance.
Thank you, with these comments I checked out those slides to see what you mean and I agree with the title slide, it could use text enlargement, but I prefer to be more specific when I had said "English photographer, painter, and drawer" over "Famous English Artist" as it gives more details into his skill set. I also had the map that size because it was well centered, although in this format if it were to be larger it would be more preferable. I also agree that the lone piece of work slide needs enlargement. With the last slide if I were to increase the image size it would distort what he looks like because it keeps his proportions intact. This was a very useful critique response that I can take something away from.
A nicely formatted and unified by presentation. I like the gray gradient background. It is still dark enough on the top to provide contrast to the text. I like the size of text on slide one but hike up "Christopher Bucklow" and place "Famous English Artist" under it, and increase the size of his picture for better balance. Keep text to one line on slide two and increase the map size. Slide three should be a bullet list with minimal words and the list should be supported with visuals on slides four through six. Slides four and five are exactly what I'm looking for: beautiful balance. Slide five's image needs to be increased and raised. Their should be more negative space on the bottom than the top. I like the picture of Bucklow with his art work on the last slide. Make that image bigger and add one line of text above it for better balance.
ReplyDeleteThank you, with these comments I checked out those slides to see what you mean and I agree with the title slide, it could use text enlargement, but I prefer to be more specific when I had said "English photographer, painter, and drawer" over "Famous English Artist" as it gives more details into his skill set. I also had the map that size because it was well centered, although in this format if it were to be larger it would be more preferable. I also agree that the lone piece of work slide needs enlargement. With the last slide if I were to increase the image size it would distort what he looks like because it keeps his proportions intact. This was a very useful critique response that I can take something away from.
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